Стихотоворение о …

20 Sep 2006 | Zanna Sinica | возбудило, лирика

Закрыл глаза,
Почувствовал прикосновенья…
Мир закружился и куда-то начал исчезать…
Исчезло время.
Это вечность иль мгновенье?
Ты даже не пытаешься узнать.
Ушли все мысли.
Есть лишь ощущенья
И тело не подвластное тебе.
И не понять, что это - взлет или паденье?
В аду горишь?
Или летишь на высоте?

16 Comments »

Comment by D-Rex

Kak-to ne po teme komentiruut…

Posted on September 6, 2008 at 8:44 pm

Comment by ZaiChik

Ruleeezzzz!!!

Posted on September 7, 2008 at 7:40 am

Comment by

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Posted on September 7, 2008 at 12:58 pm

Comment by GPS

Soglasen.

Posted on September 8, 2008 at 4:41 am

Comment by Remarka

xi-xi-xi, zabavno :)

Posted on September 9, 2008 at 6:37 pm

Comment by Sergei K

Ochen milo!

Posted on September 11, 2008 at 5:03 pm

Comment by Nightmare

Vot chto mne nravitsa u avtora tak eto chustvo umora :)

Posted on September 12, 2008 at 7:20 pm

Comment by nolik

:)

Posted on September 13, 2008 at 8:22 pm

Comment by cook

Zamechatelno.

Posted on September 14, 2008 at 6:42 am

Comment by mebelshik

.

Posted on September 14, 2008 at 8:14 pm

Comment by guzka

Krasivo govorite…

Posted on September 16, 2008 at 6:25 pm

Comment by Arhi

:-)

Posted on September 18, 2008 at 4:56 am

Comment by Xmiz

Fun :)

Posted on September 19, 2008 at 10:31 pm

Comment by Kinoman

Rassmeshilo }|{ytko… :) :) :)

Posted on September 29, 2008 at 5:43 pm

Comment by Antistres

Velikolepno skazano. Ya polnostu soglasen.

Posted on October 10, 2008 at 6:19 pm

Comment by kronna

супер

Posted on April 10, 2009 at 3:28 am

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